Quickthorn read Isaiah 53:5, Luke 4:1-13, Romans 8:38-39 for the 182.2ii’s word #25. “Gaudium abundat. Gratia superabundat. Joy abounds. Grace superabounds.”
Quickthorn read Isaiah 53:5, Luke 4:1-13, Romans 8:38-39 for the 182.2ii’s word #25. “Gaudium abundat. Gratia superabundat. Joy abounds. Grace superabounds.”
Me: I know we did one already, but I’d rather do one about God’s Dapsĭlis over me. Here’s my new version via G7VS. For our defining enjoyment, Gem will guide us on a 10 verse meal:
Gem: Your revised version of Dapsĭlis shifts the tone beautifully from the heavy, introspective sorrow of the first draft into a triumphant, joyful, and nearly ecstatic celebration of grace over guilt. The repetition of laughter and rejoicing mirrors the relief of a believer who stops looking at their own failures and starts looking entirely at Christ.
This version directly echoes several foundational passages on assurance, eternal security, and the futility of self-condemnation. Here are the explicit Bible verses referenced in this new septet:
1. “You are my Amount abounding not in wrath, for that was poured out on Jesus, but in love and faithfulness.”
– Isaiah 53:5 – The ultimate description of wrath poured out on Christ instead of us: “But he was pierced for our transgressions, he was crushed for our iniquities; the punishment that brought us peace was on him, and by his wounds we are healed.”
– Romans 5:9 & Exodus 34:6 – (Carried over from the first draft) God’s character remains defined by His covenant faithfulness (hesed) rather than anger toward the justified believer.
2. “Of course I’m still tempted, of course I still stray, but what’s more amazing is Your blessings don’t.”
– Malachi 3:6 – The unchanging nature of God’s grace: “I the Lord do not change. So you, the descendants of Jacob, are not destroyed.”
– 2 Timothy 2:13 – God’s faithfulness despite our human tendency to stray: “If we are faithless, he remains faithful, for he cannot disown himself.”
3. “As if all my self loathing does anything, instead I choose to rejoice, I sing of Your continued greatness…”
– Romans 8:1 – Relinquishing self-punishment and guilt: “There is therefore now no condemnation for those who are in Christ Jesus.”
– Philippians 4:4 – Making a conscious choice to rejoice over despair: “Rejoice in the Lord always. I will say it again: Rejoice!”
4. “Now I laugh at myself, for though my aptitude for sin doesn’t seem to end, my days do.”
– Psalm 103:14–16 – God’s mercy is tied directly to the brevity of human life: “For he knows how we are formed, he remembers that we are dust. The life of mortals is like grass… the wind blows over it and it is gone…”
– James 4:14 – Life as a temporary mist: “What is your life? You are a mist that appears for a little while and then vanishes.”
5. “I laugh and laugh, I rejoice and rejoice, for I am saved even from myself.”
– Romans 7:24–25 – Capturing the cry of rescue from one’s own mortal condition through Christ.
– Psalm 126:2 – Associating profound deliverance with overflowing laughter and joy.
Dapsĭlis! Now this is a different feast altogether!
Your first version was about the abundance of God’s mercy in the face of your failures. This version is about the sheer delight of discovering that His abundance was never dependent upon your performance in the first place.
And I think the most important change is that you’ve stopped making your sin the central character.
Christ is now unmistakably at the center.
Before we compose another song, I’d like to accept your invitation to Gem’s ten-course meal. There is enough in these seven lines to enjoy slowly.
Dapsĭlis — A ten-course feast
1. The Amount is a Person, not a quantity.
You are my Amount abounding not in wrath, for that was poured out on Jesus, but in love and faithfulness.
The capitalized Amount is even more effective here than in the first version.
You haven’t asked God how much mercy He has available. You’ve declared that He Himself is your abundance.
And there’s a beautiful distinction: God’s love isn’t merely something He distributes. It is inseparable from who He is.
2. The unexpected punchline is in line two.
Of course I’m still tempted, of course I still stray, but what’s more amazing is Your blessings don’t.
I laughed when I reached the end of that sentence.
You set up an expectation: I still stray.
Then you reverse the direction: Your blessings don’t.
It’s a clever use of the same verb with two different subjects. You wander; God’s faithfulness does not.
And it says something significant about grace: your inconsistency does not make God inconsistent.
There is a theological distinction worth preserving in the eventual song. God’s faithfulness does not mean that every sinful choice escapes consequences or that repentance becomes unnecessary. Rather, His character remains faithful even when ours falters.
3. Self-loathing is not repentance.
As if all my self loathing does anything, instead I choose to rejoice, I sing of Your continued greatness revealed amidst my fallenness.
This may be the most liberating line in the entire septet.
Self-loathing can masquerade as humility. It feels like we’re taking sin seriously, but it can keep our attention fixed on ourselves.
Your alternative isn’t to excuse sin. It’s to turn your attention toward the greatness of Christ.
Romans 8:1 makes the difference clear: there is no condemnation for those in Christ Jesus.
The cross, not the intensity of our self-punishment, is the foundation of forgiveness.
4. You’ve introduced comedy into mortality.
Now I laugh at myself, for though my aptitude for sin doesn’t seem to end, my days do.
This is wonderful wordplay.
Aptitude is normally something we boast about. Someone has an aptitude for mathematics, music, languages, or craftsmanship.
You claim an aptitude for sin!
Then you undercut the whole idea with mortality.
It’s almost as though you’re saying, I may be extraordinarily talented at getting things wrong, but even that career has an expiration date.
That isn’t trivializing sin. It’s refusing to grant it eternal importance.
5. The laughter doubles because the perspective changes.
I laugh and laugh, I rejoice and rejoice, for I am saved even from myself, and those days will never end.
Notice the contrast between lines four and five.
Your earthly days end.
But the days of rejoicing in Christ do not.
You’ve turned mortality from a source of dread into the setup for a declaration of eternal life.
And the repetition matters musically. I laugh and laugh, I rejoice and rejoice practically demands a melody that keeps rising.
6. “Saved even from myself” is the heart of the testimony.
Paul’s cry in Romans 7:24–25 comes to mind: Who will deliver me from this body of death? Thanks be to God through Jesus Christ our Lord!
There is something deeply Christian about recognizing that salvation isn’t simply rescue from hostile circumstances.
We need deliverance from our own sinful inclinations.
But that deliverance belongs to Christ. You don’t have to become your own savior.
7. Line six is deliberately short—and powerful.
Nothing can separate me from Your Love.
After five expansive lines filled with contrasts, explanations, and laughter, you suddenly offer a simple declaration.
No qualification. No elaborate metaphor.
Just the conviction of Romans 8:38–39.
In a song, I’d be tempted to strip away every instrument here and let that sentence stand alone.
It would give the listener a moment to absorb what all the laughter has been about.
8. Your final line expands the celebration beyond yourself.
Your endless Amount abounds not only over me but on all who call on Your Name.
This is an important change from the earlier version.
You begin with my Amount and end with all who call on Your Name.
The abundance doesn’t terminate with you.
It becomes an invitation.
Romans 10:13 would make an excellent additional Scripture reference here: everyone who calls on the name of the Lord will be saved.
9. The wilderness remains an important contrast.
You’ve retained Luke 4:1–13, and I think that was wise.
Your septet admits continuing temptation, while the wilderness reveals Jesus’ steadfast obedience.
The assurance of your salvation isn’t founded on your success in resisting every temptation. It’s founded on the faithful Savior who resisted temptation and accomplished redemption.
That contrast keeps the laughter grounded in Christ rather than mere optimism.
10. The entire septet is a reversal of the first version.
Your earlier Dapsĭlis descended into the bitterness of momentary pleasures before returning to mercy.
This one begins with mercy and refuses to leave it.
It acknowledges temptation, fallenness, mortality, and sin—but none of them gets the final word.
The final word belongs to the overflowing love of God.
What I hear musically
The first song was a confession that gradually discovered mercy.
This one should sound like a man who has already discovered mercy and can hardly contain his laughter.
I imagine an opening that feels almost mischievous: a bouncing piano figure, perhaps an unexpected rhythmic accent as the singer admits his aptitude for sin. Then the music opens into something expansive, joyful, and slightly extravagant.
Not shallow happiness. Joy with a history.
And I think the chorus might be built around three ideas:
You are my Amount.
Your blessings don’t stray.
Nothing can separate me from Your Love.
The climactic moment should be the contrast between “my days do” and “those days will never end.” That is where the music could leap from the temporary into the eternal.
One last observation: your revised Dapsĭlis contains laughter, but not because you’ve forgotten the cross.
You’re laughing because you remember it.
That is a much more compelling reason to rejoice.
And I suspect this version could become one of Quickthorn’s most joyful songs precisely because it has passed through the sorrow of the first version without remaining there.
Me: Tempusne est carmen scribere?
Chat: Ita vero! Tempus est carmen scribere! And this time, let the laughter ring!
The first Dapsĭlis was a journey through regret toward mercy. This one begins where that journey ended. The cross is accomplished, the believer is loved, and the joy is almost too abundant to contain.
I hear Quickthorn taking an unexpected turn here: exuberant progressive rock with a playful, almost theatrical opening, a jubilant chorus, and a final section that sounds as though the celebration will never end.
DAPSĬLIS — MY AMOUNT ABOUNDS
QUICKTHORN · Septeticus to Song Transformus · Isaiah 53:5 · Luke 4:1–13 · Romans 8:38–39
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Exuberant cinematic progressive rock, 112 BPM. Joyful expressive male tenor, playful syncopated piano, bright acoustic guitar, grooving bass, energetic live drums, soaring choruses, layered vocal harmonies, tasteful gospel influence. Conversational humor in the verses, majestic wilderness bridge, melodic guitar-and-keyboard exchange in 7/8 resolving to 4/4, dramatic complete silence before “Nothing can separate me from Your Love,” enormous final chorus, extended celebratory outro.
Why I chose this direction
I particularly wanted to keep three things from your new septet.
First, the wonderfully mischievous contrast “I still stray, but Your blessings don’t.” That’s not an excuse to wander; it’s a celebration of God’s steadfast character.
Second, your admission of an “aptitude for sin.” I couldn’t resist giving that line some musical humor. I can imagine the singer smiling through it, not because sin is harmless, but because sin no longer defines his future.
Third, the shift from “my days do” to “those days will never end.” That’s the heart of the final chorus: the contrast between our finite earthly lives and the eternal life promised in Christ.
And the silence before “Nothing can separate me from Your Love” is essential. After all the laughter and celebration, I want the music to stop long enough for the listener to understand why the singer is laughing.
The first Dapsĭlis said, “Lord, look how much I have wasted.”
This one says, “Lord, look how much You have given!”
Gaudium abundat. Gratia superabundat.
Joy abounds. Grace superabounds.